And that's it for my Zero-Template Challenge. I hope you liked it, but judging from the comments and the responses on my discord, you did.
Let's touch on the specific races.
Karkadann
They seem good, a nice addition, and people were impressed by how much you could do with just a few features. I think they highlight the core benefit of this challenge: it forces you to think about what makes your race different rather than pre-spending points somewhere (a DX +2 race with Combat Reflexes is probably much less interesting to a player than the Karkadann). Someone also expressed surprise at the amount of lore; that's a lot easier to do when you have a lot of lore to draw on (world-building tends to snowball after awhile).
So they're in. I'll work out some additional details. I don't think they'll remain as a zero-template race, but most of the changes will be to either exaggerate particular elements or to give them a little more obvious physiology.
Vithani
Uh, these were passionately received. It resulted in a lot of very heated commentary, not against them, not against one another, just the sort of commentary I often see when passions run high. People really liked this race a lot. It got comments, it got people planning characters, it got deep discussions about their proper place in the universe, what symbolism they needed to be a part of, etc.
They're definitely going in, and like the Karkadann, they'll get some adjustment... though less than I initially thought! I will probably price things more fairly (Low Pressure Lungs should give points back, given how rarely it will benefit them, unless they also get some sort of extremely short-term vacuum support, which they might get, I don't know). I'm rather inclined to at least keep Night-Adapted Vision; I might keep Ultravision too; people weren't too bothered by it, but I feel like it's the sort of thing a GM or PC would forget. There might be some ways to tone it down, though.
Aura is popular, so we'll keep it. I may reword their destiny, and give them back Dreamer.
I think the big lesson of the Vithani, other than sexy aliens with good art are popular, is that you can probably get a lot more mileage out of Power-Ups 9 than you think. If the attributes are reworked for one specific race, it can create a very different sort of experience for that race. I don't think I'd use it that much in Psi-Wars unless it's for a race that has a very different mode of existence, but it would be fascinating to approach a truly alien species in a more "hard sci-fi" game, especially a race that, say, has a very different form of intelligence. If you're looking for crazy inspiration for how to make a race play in a different way, consider looking though PU9.
The Herne
They got a more positive response than I thought, with a lot of discussion around the feasibility of the seasonal traits. Based on that discussion, I don't think I'll bring the Herne into the game.
First, a sapient race on Arcadius is already iffy. I want that world to be a bit fey-touched, so people tell stories and they may experience things, but there's little actual concrete evidence of a race, and it might be something like sapient psychic deer or something causing all the commotion. Introducing the Herne would break that. That's not necessarily a problem, we can discard this idea of a strange world and just replace it with a strange race (and anyway, the Labyrinth is already rather like this), but when you combine it with the second, it becomes clear this is more trouble than it's worth.
The bigger problem is obviously the seasonality. But why? It's parasitic design, and my choices for fixing it generally amount to removing it, which suggests its a bad idea. Let me explain.
Someone pointed out that one reason you'd want to play this race is to have a shifting toolbox, which I definitely agree with and was one of the comments that made me go "Aha!" You want, as a Herne player, to be forced between multiple different modes; like if you have a social or combat mode, and you're in social mode and partaking in a heist, then you want to try to talk your way through. If you suddenly find yourself in combat mode, you'll shift to fighting instead. An external force controls how you interact, and this is interesting. But it can be troublesome, and so you might want to have some measure of control, but if you can control it, it ceases to function like a shifting toolbox: if you're in social mode but would rather fight, you just change back to combat mode and fight. Then the interesting element is removed as just a small, weird speed bump to doing what you want. If you want to have some player agency in their mode, some ability to influence it, but you don't want them to just flip between two modes, you might give them a variety of modes and let them shift between one or two, but most of their modes are locked out a time. That gives them the flexibility to shift a little without losing the strange, mercurial nature of the character.
But it gets a lot more complex. The player needs to know a bunch of rules, the GM needs to know a bunch of rules, I need to write a bunch of rules, and what benefit is all of this complexity? The player is constantly bugging the GM to tell him about a season on a remote world and then sighing and telling the players that he cannot do the thing because it's the wrong season. The rest of the players have no connection to this, and the only reason the GM knows this at all is because ONE SINGLE PLAYER decided to play as the Herne. I do believe this is that the kids these days call Parasitic Design. So the solution is either to remove it as irrelevant or make it relevant to everyone.
One of my rules at work is "if it hurts, do it more." I think this applies, in a sense, to gameplay. If it matters at all, then everyone should have an opportunity to interface with it. It should affect everyone's gameplay. It might not affect them directly, and it might not be something they even know about, but they should be able to capitalize on knowledge of it, if they want, without a major investment. A good example of this is the Deep Engine: it's a secret that only certain sorcerers can directly access. That said, even if you're not a sorcerer who is in the know, it's also a great source of bad guys, monsters, dungeons, etc. You can run across Deep Engine Sites, for example, so its existence and knowledge is useful to the GM for more than just that once sorcerer.
So what if the Herne were influenced not by the season of Arcadius, but by the galactic season? In the Great Book of Destiny, I refer to these as Hours, and they would tie into Fortune-Telling, what sort of Destinies people could get, and might be something that other people could hang sorceries or other powers on. The Herne, then, would be tied to something that's useful for the GM to know for reasons other than just the Herne.
Of course, this also sounds more like something the Vithani should be associated with than a race on Arcadius, and I wanted the third "Master" race of the Umbral Rim to have something akin to this, as this is a great thing to hang an "occulted system" on, if certain modifiers or available spells change based on a mysterious arrangement of stars or other things and you have to learn to read those and see how they interact with other elements of the game. This third "Master" race was also set at the fringe of the Umbral Rim, which is where the Vithani are, and so we start to see some connections. I'm not saying the Vithani are the third master race, but they might come from the same region, and a picture starts to emerge of a particular region of the Umbral Rim and its history and relationship with the early Ranathim Tyranny.
Such a system becomes something integrated into the rest of the game, and greater complexity is much less of a problem, because knowing that complexity is rewarding to more than just the Herne player. But it also ceases to be something I'd associate with the Herne and Arcadius. We could change it instead to be something more a reaction to the ambient temperature of the world, which starts to borrow on ideas form World-Walking, which is your available options depend on the nature of the world you're on, which is interesting for a world-hopping campaign, but then again the Herne lose their unusual connection to an unusual world.
So either way I see it, while this mechanic might be perfectly fine, I feel like the Herne are the wrong place to put it. So we'll park it, park the race and see if we can cannibalize the ideas for a different race or set of systems.
The Rejects
The Blue-Skinned Arctic Monkeys saw some positive responses. Infravision, blue skin and being naturally accustomed to colder weather is interesting enough to make someone stand out. They're not especially interesting to play, but they're also not just a reorientation of points. Humans aren't especially interesting to play, and this race is about that interesting. I'll think about this one. Psi-Wars doesn't have a lot of arctic content, but we can also borrow ideas from here for a "hot-blooded" race too.
The Gasping Maga-Pillars had more interest than I expected, but mostly discussions of alternate forms. I think there are some interesting ideas here, but few of them have anything to do with the actual design here and more the ideas they inspire. The Sylvan Spiral Needs Races Badly, but this one isn't it.
The Deep-Song Triton-Men got a laugh. This one felt more like vented frustration with the challenge than a genuinely interesting race.
The Void-Dancers got more interest than I expected. I think we can afford to have a vacuum-native race somewhere, but it feels more like a background element unless they have means by which they can interact with the rest of the part in a more face-to-face manner without always being in armor.
That said, always being in armor is actually an interesting racial concept. The Arkhaians sort of do this already, but there's room for more, something like the Breen, the Vorlon or one of the earlier conceptions of the Mandalorians. As I commented before, I'm trying hard to get people out of their armor, but a race that is always in its armor is distinct, depending on what the armor is like. It's not something I really touched on much, but a race native to a very different gas mixture might have something like that. I still wouldn't call it a feature, though, but a disadvantage.
The Challenge
I had fun. It generated a lot of discussion and seemed to inspire a lot. It also told me there's a lot of hunger for minor races, regardless of their point cost. A proposed variation on the challenge is a race worth no more than +/- 5 points, with no more than an absolute value of 10 points in traits, advantages, disadvantages etc. I will note that I often found features to be more sweeping than perks or 5 point traits so you'll still find it a fairly limiting challenge.
It did get me thinking about how much of my racial templates are largely cosmetic features, things like "Horns and fangs and teeth and tails." I wonder if it would be worth a sidebar discussion about removing those traits, or ignoring them, for greater simplicity. It's a rather fine-grained accounting to worry about minor levels of night vision of +1 crushing damage from a headbutt, even though these are certainly advantages.
